ONE LOST SOUL

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  • Sadness

    Poem Commentary

    I was so confused and probably hurt when I took out my pen and started to write this poem. It was when I felt like I was oh so alone and that no one cared at all. Moreover, while I was trying to create my lines, I believed I wasn’t the only one having this kind of feeling. So, to anyone who can relate to this, I gladly share this poem.

    ONE LOST SOUL

    Like in a dreamy horizon

    A soul may be lost and long forgotten

    Looking for a way near to heaven

    Seeking refuge and afraid of being beaten.

     

    Somewhere, somehow, someone might have been rejected

    Pain has been inflicted

    Sorrow has been implanted

    Like a deadly virus that has just invaded.

     

    Across the meadow, a lonesome heart is present

    Needing comfort and life is bent

    A hope to be under that ray of light

    Truth is, no one is around, and all is out of sight.

     

    Under the moonlight, a wanderer is walking

    Living in recluse, wanted nothing but more of longing

    Someday the hunger will be prevented

    Not of food but of air that’s improperly ventilated.

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    ginga commented on ONE LOST SOUL

    06-23-2010

    Zandy, I am thoroughly intrigued by the haunting images that are weaved within this poem of sorrow and woe. ginga
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    zandy

    06/24/2010

    thanks for your time to make a comment ginga! :)

    kkirkwood commented on ONE LOST SOUL

    06-17-2010

    The sorrow will pass and joy will take it place tomorrow.
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    zandy

    06/18/2010

    i believe that too! thanks kkirkwood! :)

    jyothi commented on ONE LOST SOUL

    06-16-2010

    Poem's filled with suffering and loneliness.Come out of it.
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    zandy

    06/16/2010

    thanks jyothi.. :)

    gogant commented on ONE LOST SOUL

    06-15-2010

    The saga of a lonesome soul who has been forgotten, is a bitter tear upon our cheeks.....woe to those who feel the sting. This is a poem of beauty unseen...............truly.............................gogant
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    zandy

    06/16/2010

    thanks to you gogant!! :)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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