ONE MORE CHANCE

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    ONE MORE CHANCE


    " ONE MORE CHANCE"





    Can I have one more chance?
    To hold you tight ,cuddle you
    Kiss you forehead
    One more chance
    To play that soft song
    And make you dance

    Can I have one more chance?
    To walk with you in the rain
    Playing with your ring, touching your hair
    Never let you moist your cheek with a tear

    I ask for nothing more
    Just one more chance
    To see you waiting for me at the door

    Can I have one more chance?
    To make you mine again and never letting
    you go
    Bringing back the smile on my face
    Which faded a long time ago

    Can I have one more chance?
    To feel the feel of your hair resting on my shoulder
    One more chance
    To bring back the nights full of romance

    Can I have one more chance?
    To talk to you on the phone all night long
    And irritate you again with my stupid songs.



    CAN I HAVE ONE MORE CHANCE?.......

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    cheronld commented on ONE MORE CHANCE

    05-13-2010

    beautiful poem...I wish the same thing from someone no longer in my life....thanks for giving words to my inner thoughts...nicely written.....
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    syed

    05/28/2010

    thank you for your appreciation!!!! I am glad that you could connect to it!!!!

    Bladebearer commented on ONE MORE CHANCE

    06-06-2009

    Oh wow! That poem is so beautiful! Reminds me of someone special that I've been missing for a month now. Wonderful work! Made me cry.
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    syed

    06/08/2009

    I m really honored by your comment

    Phoenix9 commented on ONE MORE CHANCE

    02-05-2009

    very good,well done
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    stormimartin commented on ONE MORE CHANCE

    02-04-2009

    I loved it.. its from the heart!
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    PunoAngulus commented on ONE MORE CHANCE

    02-03-2009

    Memories of when I was in that situation and she left me because of my faults and weaknesses that made the relationship not to work and you ask one more chance because when you have time to step back it is all gone and it is to late for anything. Gr
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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