One of a Kind

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One of a Kind

One of a kind
But one out of many
With just my mind
Like much others plenty
Not friendly and quick to envy as an enemy,
And once started there's no amending an ending
I ain't pretending where I'm attending
Because I'm defending my land on which I stand
As a man occupied with trifles, also my disciples
So futile while the dish served from the pan
Can show who you truly are
When the world really reveals who I am
I know I come from nothing
But I hold my hearts strength in hand
And in the other is my plan
While it's torn down slowly
From those who oppose me they show me hate
But I'm the only one who controls my own fate
Why wait to give when everyone else takes
And instead of an example of me, let's see what life makes.

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MATRE commented on One of a Kind

06-07-2010

keep up the good work rhyming is what kept me up n the past.they keep deeper over time

KING commented on One of a Kind

06-07-2010

I wonder what song was in your head when your were freestyling. I like the flow man. I like it alot!

JayJ420

06/16/2010

most people say I rap like bone thugs cuz I rap fast....

mustascheman commented on One of a Kind

06-07-2010

Interesting...It's like one waiting around for life to make you. Like you're not expecting it. Hoping that the end result will be something unique. A cool poem.

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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