One Phrase

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  • Lost Love

    One Phrase

    Alone in this darkness, I hide
    From the pain that I feel inside.
    One phrase haunts my hollow pride -
    Oh curse the words of the heart!
    One phrase, and my world was broken.
    The silence echoed the words you'd spoken.
    This stark desolation's my only token
    For my foolish, worthless part!

    What a shock it was that day;
    It chilled me just to hear you say
    You didn't feel for me that way,
    That it all was just a ruse.
    Cold and strangely empty, my feet
    Didn't even miss a beat
    As I passed you on the street.
    I've never felt so used.

    Why won't this feeling go away?
    Is this hollowness to always stay?
    I can no longer hold this emptiness at bay,
    Nor can I care enough to try.
    So here where the hours flow
    I watch you come and I watch you go,
    Wondering if you did ever really know
    How much I'd wanted to believe that lie.

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    Franziska commented on One Phrase

    10-16-2010

    I know that type of pain and it sucks. Trusting people is really hard and the betrayal even worse. This poem really hits home and yet vaguely familiar.

    DeepEclipse commented on One Phrase

    07-14-2010

    Once I thought words were not as threatening as they seemed. I've come to learn that is not the case. Words have toppled empires and, as this poem points out, altered people's realities. Damn. Its like trust is strong, yet fragile. Strong enough to hold together through any weight, but once betrayed almost impossible to put back together. Well expressed poem. Impressive rhyme structure.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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