only if you knew

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  • Childhood

    only if you knew
                                        Only if you knew
    I Watch you grow into the young woman that you are today. 
    From a little girl that wrapped your finger around my heart.
    To this beauty that stands in front of me.
    Only if you knew how much you have touched my heart.
    Only if you knew how much you touched my soul.
    Only if you knew how much you touched  my being.
    Only if you knew how much you showed me how to love.
    Only if you knew how much you showed me what laughter really is.
    Only if knew how you showed me hurt.
    My daughter the person that I look at and see myself. 
    I look into your eyes and I see myself. 
    This amazing Gift that you gave me. 
    Motherhood, friendship. 

    ONLY IF YOU KNEW! 

     

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    ginga commented on only if you knew

    09-02-2010

    mt., A passionate song to a daughter and friend that builds with each repetitive line. ginga
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    eddie14 commented on only if you knew

    04-26-2010

    I ve been a Mr. mom of my now 20 year old daughter Ive raise her since she was 1 years old and though it all the errors and mistakes if she only knew i would do it all over again for her because she is worth it.even if im a dad I can relate to this poem it was awesome
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    mountainlady

    04/26/2010

    thank you....

    lunamarie commented on only if you knew

    04-18-2010

    ml, ... oh my ... the second line in this poem is absolutely amazing ... wow ............ lm
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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