Open Up the Door

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    Open Up the Door

    I yearn for the man I first knew;

    I know time has added some scars;

    For I truly love the man that's deep inside,

    I pray that he will open up so that I may show my true side.
    O' how I long for the passion we hold so deep within,
    Knock, Knock, Please let me come in;
    For I long to be one with thee,
    Let our love be an overflow for others to see.
    I just want to be a part of U!
    See me for Me; Not for who I use to be!
    All I want is just U!
    Please allow the door to open so that I may feel the best part of U!

    Open Up the Door, Please, for my heart longs for the person deep within U;
    Because your true Beauty is deep within!

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    orsonav commented on Open Up the Door

    07-24-2009

    This is romance at it's best. This poem is full of passion from begining to end. Overall, It is a wonderful piece of work that highlight the element of having to breakdown walls and barriers. Great Job!
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    Trea

    07/27/2009

    To God be the Glory! I truly Thank You for reading this poem. I grateful for the comment you gave about this poem. It's true that out of your pain can come wonderful things. Thank You again! Keep on reading and I will do the same.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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