O'So Far ** Daniel

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this is to my Daniel dear...

O'So Far ** Daniel

I found a lover
He lives in Georgia
His name is Daniel

He's tall white and handsome
He sleeps in peace at night
He holds a heart that belongs 2 me
This I know cause I see him in my dreams

It's no love afair
It's no secret to the world
It's no fantasy..i swear

It's O'So Far he is from me
I dream of him
His lovely beautiful eyes see mine and nothing more
Our spirits connect..like doves
Our hearts pound in love and nt lust
Our souls long to enbrace and touch
To be near is far : He and I live across the world from each other
but our love is next door to one another ...

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daniel081180 commented on O'So Far ** Daniel

12-28-2009

OMG!!! Baby i love you so so so so so so so much. I can't believe that God seen fit to give you to me. But i thank him every day for doing so. You are my life my everything. No one else could ever take your place. Can't wait to be with you forever.

HiddenAngel

12/28/2009

i as well am very thankfull darling we have waited for so many years for this time to come and we are now back in God's grace I have to say it will a delightfull journey with the two of us and our sons we will b great examplse 4 other to stay strong and hold on true love will prevail with God's blessings i love you DANIEL Brown

daniel081180

12/28/2009

i wish i could put into words the way i feel like you do love. You are so right though. True love has finally prevailed. So Glad it was me.

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