Our first kiss "Stopped Time"

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    Our first kiss "Stopped Time"
    Life's sweetest dreams really do come true,
    Thats the day that I met you.

    Your gentle touch and thoughtful ways,
    lighten hearts and brighten days.

    And all the good things that you do,
    Reflect the person inside of you.

    You are the stars I wish upon,
    The first warm breeze of spring.

    You are the dawn of each new day,
    To me your everything.

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    mgolda22 commented on Our first kiss "Stopped Time"

    03-30-2009

    Been looking for that perfect poem that expresses how I feel for my husband...I found it in yours...BEAUTIFUL!!!
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    peacefully commented on Our first kiss "Stopped Time"

    03-30-2009

    Merrilyn, This was very good writing. You were able to get your inner feelings across with very few words.
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    fennesse commented on Our first kiss "Stopped Time"

    03-26-2009

    simply beautiful sometimes less is more keep crankin' en out Merrilyn! I look forward.
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    kaleo55 commented on Our first kiss "Stopped Time"

    03-24-2009

    Upfront, to the point and beautiful.
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    pocketofdreams6 commented on Our first kiss "Stopped Time"

    03-11-2009

    Simplistic, yet to the point, and beautiful, good stuff!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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