Out of Reach

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  • Yearning

    Out of Reach
    This golden wave catches my eye

    This luminous body I cannot deny

    Covered within a deep blue drape

    Cannot look away from this dreamscape

    Flawless and wondrous I can't look away

    But alas it is out of reach to my dismay

    A sight which is a sight to wondrously see

    Forever will be out of reach of me

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    rainyxsun commented on Out of Reach

    07-15-2010

    This reminds me of the sky. But it could remind you of "Oh My Goddess" too. ^ ^ Good poem. Not your best flowing one. BUT it still flows . *thumbs up* Nice . ^ ^
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