Over

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  • Lost Love

    Over

    Like a shadow in the dark
    A sweet memory, in the heart.
    You try to remember where, when
    What happened, why did it end?
    Was there something you could have done?
          Love is gone, I'm overcome.


    It's hard to blink without the tears,
    Letting go of all those years
    All the love and all the pain,
    Gone forever, no sweet refrain.
    With a blink of the eye, a beat of the heart,
         The whole world ends as we part.

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    Sx9 commented on Over

    12-16-2009

    deep,,so hold on to one ,just one memody,,love this,,

    Optionalsanity commented on Over

    07-08-2009

    I like this. A clear expression of the pain of love lost. I like the rhythm and sometimes you don't want to struggle with symbolism. Very nice

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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