overdose

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    Poem Commentary

    there are no words to say to make this anymore clear

    overdose

    OVERDOSE

    What an ugly word 

    Do you know what it means? Not the dictionarie definition.

    No. I mean do you know what it does?

    To a family?

    To a realationship?

    It can tear you apart from everyone you love.

    It can take you away from everyone you love and ever cared about.

    It never only affects you

    If you ever think your life sucks enough to go and overdose,

    Always remember that you can always find someone who loves you enough to miss you when your 

    Gone.......

     


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    brokenwings25 commented on overdose

    10-28-2009

    I liked the message but it did not flow well to me. Keep writing there is plenty to say at your age.

    anglescry2

    10/28/2009

    thank you for your support! i did realize that it didn't flow .. i was jus angry when i wrote it.. thanks again!

    Tempestlady commented on overdose

    10-14-2009

    Ususally i have found a punishment intended just for those people. Oran escape. Nice font!, rhythm was good, form not so much. message was excellent. write on....

    anglescry2

    10/17/2009

    thank youy! i wrote this on a day were i was very upset with a member of my family. thanks for your feed back , it helps me become a better writer

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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