• christianprep
  • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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True story, true poem about My grandpa.. I worte my worries down so i can keep the right state of mind pleas comment if you like.

Pa

This is the Pa I know.

The kind of person that gives his love

The kind of person that does for others

And always has to be doing something.

Never have I seen you waste your day...

And your an amazing friend..

 

Pa does not deserve

To suffer like you are now

Because your not even yourself.

To be stomped on or unloved

Because you will just show them love

 

 

Pa has lung cancer

Hospital we went,

and surgery is what you had.

Removed the tissue from your lungs

And Family was their and scared.

 

Pa my reaction was,

I know I should go in and see him,

before he goes back.

I know by faith that he will be okay.

for I could not see him in pain,

but visited him twice before heading home

and he was okay things were great.

 

Pa to find out

That your having problems with

Blocked arteries, passing out, and a heart attack.

To know your in so much pain,

That your not you any more hurts me so

 

Bad new from doctor,

leads into worries, for everything is not okay

their is nothing they can do,

To know your in pain and the clock is winding down

that you will be leaving us and not knowing when

scares me, for all of my family, and im a little selfish

but I know you will be going home,

thats what makes me happy, but I wish you didn't have to suffer so

And yet God has a plain and purpose for u.

Just wanted to say I love you so, and everything will be okay..

 

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

christianprep’s Poems (44)

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Pa 0
March In Victory 1
Dateless 1
Prayer Study and Poem 1
A letter To God 0
Goal Against The World 0
Book Revelations and revelation 1
Mother Here's My heart 0
No Friend 1
Beast 2
Silent Tears 2
Rippled Heart 3
My Book Immortal 1
Danger Great Revelations 2
Abba 3
Saved 1
Mistakes 0
Showstoppers 1
Nightmare 4
I prayed to God 0
Eke Towed Prince 1
Soulmate 2
Asylum 8
Prosper A Fate 2
Hellfire 1
Dangerous 2
Broken Family 1
Depression in her heart 2
Everything You Reap You Sow 2
Tell me Your Beutiful 1
Cauious and Open 1
I am proud to call you savor 3
Simple flames 2
christmas children 2
MOSES 4
Not My Time 1
Just Time 3
Dawning 1
I am God 2
weeping tears 1
Dance with me 1
DARKNESS 1
hail third series 0
heaven series two 5