Pain and You

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    I'm not a good poet, I must admit that! Maybe its common.. But iTs from my heart so i guess i made the best.lol.. (RC)

    Pain and You

    If I were to compare,
    Pain and You,
    I will choose Pain,

    Why?

    All this time I got hurt,
    You were there for me!
    All this time I got worried,
    You are there to comfort me,
    All this time, I'm feeling lonely
    You are there,made me smile,
    and never leave me.

    I would like to thank the Pain.
    Pain that gave me reason to live,
    Pain that lets you be here always,
    anytime any where.
    It made you stay beside me.

    Now my life was broken by Pain,
    But you are there even when there's thunder and Rain
    Giving sweet thoughts, sweet love and sweet memories,
    That i can't forget even when my life end!

    Now, You are far,
    It gives me Pain,
    But it made me wait you to come,
    and give me strenght and beliefs,
    that sooner we will be together
    and surely our love..

    will live stronger and forever!

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    badwan commented on Pain and You

    02-22-2010

    Good to have such trust and hope, itis the magic of love. It is a clear signe of a comming up poet.

    gorgeousjhann commented on Pain and You

    01-13-2010

    i thank everyone for appreciating my poem.. this is just the first time i made a poem.. but then i hope u like it... lol

    dahlusion commented on Pain and You

    12-20-2009

    A lovely poetic gem with all the right emotions and creative imagery to carry the reader to the end.

    Madelynn commented on Pain and You

    09-09-2009

    Great Concept!-I always say that in all situations-be greatful for the challenge faced/or pain, as you have put it-because its what makes us who we are-it's really such a gift in diguise,-For you to use that in context of bringing you and your love together-how simply sweet a thought.-I enjoyed this!thank you for sharing with us.

    WordSlinger

    02/22/2010

    It sure is, if this is your first poem, I have to had it to you, very good, I wish you no pain, but more poems. Pain brings one Closer to the Heart

    hope commented on Pain and You

    06-25-2009

    Your poem is nice, good for the heart and it depict the inner feelings of the heart and soul. i like poems that springs forth from the inside. You shall be a good poetess the more you write. cheers

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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