Pain in Body and Soul

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    Pain in Body and Soul

    There's an evil within,
    that lurks in your heart,
    Waiting to jump out,
    And tear me apart.

    Seeing things wrong,
    When nothing is there,
    You tear out my heart,
    As well as my hair.

    As if waiting to pounce,
    For some imagined affair,
    When would it happen,
    When you're always there?

    I've always been faithful,
    Not that it's done any good.
    My love for you was complete,
    But apparently misunderstood.

    Enough of the violence,
    that I've had to endure,
    Even of your son,
    You weren't even sure.

    The alcohol is talking,
    In the back of your brain,
    It is evil incarnate,
    Coming out again.

    The look on your face,
    When you come at me viciously,
    Hurts me to the core.
    Like your taking pride deliciously.

    No more beatings
    No more pleadings,
    Nothing more but court proceedings.



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    Forestbird commented on Pain in Body and Soul

    11-17-2009

    Strong and harmful. It sounds like story of so many women. Written very straight forward. Hard to estrange myself from the content and just talk about writing style

    devaamido commented on Pain in Body and Soul

    09-11-2009

    The only thing I can think of to say is congratulations, & to guess that this was way overdue! Be blessed with the best of what you need now! This is one powerful poem that should be on the cover of "Lucky" for the consideration of all girls & women.

    PrettyTough commented on Pain in Body and Soul

    04-02-2009

    I could feel your pain and frustration. I have been in the sasme situation and it takes great strength to endure that life and overcome it! I applaud you. What doesn't kill us makes us stronger!

    Fina commented on Pain in Body and Soul

    03-26-2009

    That was great!

    dahlusion commented on Pain in Body and Soul

    03-26-2009

    Painfully beautiful, poetically powerful.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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