Pain Therapy


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I have been having a few bad yrs lately and this just came out, hope someone can get some use out of my words. We are not alone.

Pain Therapy

My mind is running wild
Thoughts are at supersonic speeds
Some I understand right away
Others are a double standard

So many things have gone horribly wrong
It makes it hard to keep hanging around
Supposed love ones tear me apart
Saying and doing such evil and vile

My soul aches and my heart hurts so
It's hard not to end it all
That would end all the hurt and pain
But, I really don't think it would solve a thing

Passing all my aches and pains
On to my loved ones just sounds insane
Everyday I have photographs to admire
My son's picture reminds me to be a fighter

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prettykitty commented on Pain Therapy


wow i really like this 1. its how every1 feels wen they have felt the loss of something important to them.



Thanks. You have a good Thanksgiving and keep writing. Peace.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

boomboom56’s Poems (21)

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Not Good Today..... 5
Thank You 3
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