Pain.

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Pain.

Pain: I wish it not to know my name.
Pain: simply the embodiment of thought.
Thought: an exchange of idea in ones mind.
Thought: an impassive wanting.
Wanting: a secret desire.
Wanting: a secret lie.
Lies: are all you ever say.
Lies: are what make up my life.
Life: worthless.
Life: unwanted.
Unwanted: Pain knows no boundaries.
Unwanted: your words.
You: unworthy.
You: hurt me.
Pain: you.

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iLuvPoetryJACOB commented on Pain.

12-02-2009

WOW........its gonna be a while for me to get in a good mood again....cuz now im all depressed and stuff. poems are usually emotions beautifully described on a paper. and this poem is plainly about depression. do you really want to die? it frightens me because i would never want ANYONE to feel this way......send me a private message or something....,you can talk to me..... good poem though. =]

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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