PAIN

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  • Lost Love

    PAIN


    I tired a lot to save it
    but the heart fly's again

    When those eyes stunk by
    my heart feels no PAIN

    There is no pain now
    That's all it could gain

    Than the desires ached
    when he left me once again

    Now day and night i wait
    As my heart is aching of PAIN

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    caverox101 commented on PAIN

    04-02-2009

    To the bone, awesome!
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    syed

    10/01/2009

    thank you!!!

    sjlove commented on PAIN

    01-28-2009

    i agree with PA but a letting the heart fly is a good thing. let the heart (love) explore.
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    drewking commented on PAIN

    01-23-2009

    nice!!
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    mujju commented on PAIN

    12-15-2008

    nice work!!! i li itke
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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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