Pandoras box

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    AND YES KARMA CAN WRITE SOME GOOD LYRICS.

    THE SONG SPEAKS FOR IT  SELF.

    SOMETIMES OPENING  UP TO MUCH CAN SOMETIMES BACKFIRE.
     B4 YOU OPEN YOUR HEART SEE WHAT THE OTHER HAS TO OFFER YOU B4 YOU JUMP.

    COMMENT!!!

    Pandoras box

    this is actully a song
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    v1:

    I have insecurity's...i'm not gunna lie.
    My hart is fragile so please just try to be kind.
    I cant open up my hart entirely just yet.
    Cuz i wanna see...what else god has in store for me.
    Loves is like poetry.....it just cant be rushed.
    I gotta read between the lines. So i dont get lost.
    People say one thing..and then they turn & do another.
    I gotta protect whats mine...so tell me if i'm wasteing my time.

    >>>>>>>choures<<<<<<<<
    i cant give you all of me just yet....
    I wanna see if you can back up what u said and what u feel.
    I just gotta see if this is for real.
    And then maybe you'll be the key...to pandoras box

    v2:
    I have certain issues...i'm not gunna hide.
    I bin threw hell & back...and i'm not gunna go threw it this time.
    I cant open up my hart compleatly just yet.
    Cuz i wanna see what u got for me...and if your 4 real.
    Love is like a flower....it takes time and grows.
    And this i already kno....i just cant be thrown in a race. When i cant find my way..
    People hide ther eyes and telling lies ... Tell me if this is a waste of your time....
    copyright  2010   all rights reserved
    By Karma

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    icu2 commented on Pandoras box

    04-13-2010

    This is a great poem/song. You've got talent, girl!...............10

    DeepEclipse commented on Pandoras box

    01-11-2010

    Make em earn it. Dr. Seuss himself once said "Don't worry about impressions because those that matter won't mind and those that mind won't matter." Society so full of pretentions, how can one trust easily? I like the stance of this poem. It stabs desperation in the throat and forces to earn what rightfully is. Nice.

    indiancowboy91 commented on Pandoras box

    11-18-2009

    Another masterpiece, Miss Karma................your talent is unequalled........................

    soulwriter commented on Pandoras box

    09-24-2009

    "Love is like a flower....it takes time and grows." - so true, many beautiful heartfelt lines revealed in this piece! I know that grammatical perfection is sought by many, however I believe in the content just as well, and your intent shows through delivered right from your heart.

    Artie commented on Pandoras box

    08-29-2009

    I like this - it has a good rhythm to it. What style of music did you have in mind when you wrote it?

    Karma885

    09/19/2009

    hey thanx i'm glad u liked it. its kinda has like a rock pop feel to it..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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