Part Three: The Red Road
Part Three: The Red RoadPath of Heart,
of Connection;
Ribbon of blood, sweat, and tears,
Part Three: The Red Road
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Poem Commentary
Part 3 of 3 ... my apologies to those who already read this posted as one piece (in 3 parts) ... which was a little overwhelming all together onscreen ... and my thanks and deep appreciation for your willingness to stick with it in that form and comment so thoughtfully ... thank you! (Sept 2009)(Oct7, 2009) Edited significantly ... this was a raw piece when first posted ... wasn't happy with several lines that just didn't come off right, and ended up telling a slightly different story in a slightly different tone ... but with the same intention of clarity and sincerity and peace and light to you, friend, for reading ... -dh
(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com
Path of Heart,
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Poem Comments
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graceladymn commented on Part Three: The Red Road
10-18-2009
- As you wish you strike matches to the heart enflaming passionate gifts calling forth the sharing and so it is. Grand write.
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10/18/2009
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Grito commented on Part Three: The Red Road
10-14-2009
- Pensive and at ease, flat rimed black hatted figure, Stands, facing the sunset. Wide rolling horizon dotted with green, half the world a sky Beckons.
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10/14/2009
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11/04/2009
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jeanpnkldyg commented on Part Three: The Red Road
10-08-2009
- Your enlightenment is a gift to all who read. Your poems create a peaceful place to go.
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10/08/2009
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