Passing Lover

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    Passing Lover

    I knew when i saw you passing that day that
    nothing yet everything would stay the same

    when you spoke it was like music to my ears
    this stranger that i knew was you.
    Many thoughts played in my mind
    like if i could just have you one time
    and you could just
    make a
    Slow move
    fast groove
    add me to your sway

    lay me down
    and have your way

    Take me to a world unknown
    press me to the limits of the danger zone

    Long hard kisses I await
    the tenderness of your lips
    I can no longer take

    Whisper in my ear
    tell me all of the nasty things I want to hear

    Heat pressed us skin to skin
    I take a deep breath
    trying to hold it all in

    Sweat crosses my brow

    while the echo of your screams
    seem so loud

    Come let me taste you
    feel you
    consume myself in you
    delighting myself in you
    but morning comes
    and none of this will do
    when
    I know I'll be leaving you
    taken for what it is
    and all that i have known
    there is no need to pick up a phone
    we'll talk in a day or two

    pretending this was nothing new
    just turn and walk away
    becoming just a passer by with no need to stay

    it was worth my dreams
    that became the reality
    we will be forever bonded you and me.

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    aliceogden commented on Passing Lover

    08-20-2009

    I see you like to write these kinds of poems and I find it amusing, chat with me sometimes. I just started posting but I think this is a great poem.

    janetdawson

    08/21/2009

    thank you, i write whatever i feel at the moment. may i ask why you find this style of writing amusing.

    littleonyx commented on Passing Lover

    03-23-2009

    Woot! Oooooooh, you so nasty!! Keep it up! : )

    littleonyx commented on Passing Lover

    03-23-2009

    Woot! Oooooooh, you so nasty!! Keep it up! : )

    OUTSPOKEN commented on Passing Lover

    03-18-2009

    Hey Janet, I was speaking with you earlier in the chat room!! thanks for the request!! I am feelin PASSING LOVER!! Keep @ it! peace&riches OUTSPOKEN

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