Passion

4 Comments

Tags:
  • Erotic

    Passion

    To order book, see www.louizapatsis.com.

    I've awakened from a dream.
    I turn around and see your face.
    Candles burn.
    I rub my eyes,
    and go to put on makeup.
    We kissed and you drank me up.
    You enveloped me with you.
    I was you.
    What day is it?
    The calendar says Monday.
    Damn! I have a pimple!
    The wind blows fiercely.
    I have to hold on.
    you begin to awaken
    with dazzled eyes.
    you look at me with a smile.
    You know.
    Chains trap my body.
    to the bed.
    I want to go!
    Let me go!
    I smile softly and kiss your face.
    I hate you!
    "What do you want for breakfast?"
    "You."
    the window shatters.
    Red curtains blow in t3eh wind.
    i hear a wild scream.
    ""No! No! Yes! More!"
    you grab me and kiss my neck,
    down to my vein - my soul.
    You kiss my lips gently.
    red lights are glaring.
    Mouths. Tongues. Fire.
    I get up, leave,
    and slam the door.

    Poem Comments

    (4)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    anniebloom commented on Passion

    04-21-2009

    awwww sweet

    Grito commented on Passion

    04-17-2009

    An excellent breakfast. 10

    dahlusion commented on Passion

    01-08-2009

    Well written, but I am missing how it's erotic. Seems more sensual than erotic

    rollerderby commented on Passion

    01-03-2009

    Well done dear, you build me up just to close the do before the fire really gets going. I really liked the way you played with different scenarios. It kept my attention. Doug

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Louiza’s Poems (26)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Wait! Spring 0
    Disappeared 0
    Blistering Lips 0
    Glance 0
    Sorry 0
    Day and Night 0
    Velvet Leaf 0
    Paradise 0
    Cypress Tree 0
    Be Yourself 0
    Farmer 0
    Freedom 0
    Paradise 0
    Geometric Lines 0
    Old Man Walking Old Dog 0
    Wise, Win, Kind 0
    Terpsichore 0
    City Alive 1
    Surrender to Myself 1
    Everything Nothing 0
    My Poem for 2009 0
    Cat and Ball 4
    Passion 4
    Quality Man 4
    Pashmina Scarves 1
    I Dream of You 2