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  • Lost Love
    • catarino
    • Cultures come to conquer and their gods applaud.

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    My everyday is now stained
    With the memories of
    Moments we shared-

    Holding on.


    Quietly, I disguise
    The need to cry
    As life passes by-

    Without me

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    mamasan commented on pause

    11-10-2009

    I like the unique way you have of putting your thoughts across. You are definitely a wordsmith in a class by yourself. Your good, no your par excellence. And the music you make lingers on and I dab at another tear....

    klassik commented on pause

    08-09-2009

    you are a poet! i am a friend of your work great write! Congrats!

    jademelissa74 commented on pause

    06-02-2009

    The content is deep, yet clear to the reader. You exhibit a well depicted message. I really enjoyed this poem. A ten from me! :))

    AbysmalGoddess commented on pause

    05-14-2009

    I read it again and I'm still in awe by it, i love this poem just as much and more as 13days 19 hours and 11 minutes ago!

    AbysmalGoddess commented on pause

    04-30-2009

    short and sweet, just how it should be.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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    broken beat 3
    water song 2
    subtle 0
    days 0
    time always 1
    inicio 2
    to a new friend 1
    (close to you) 0
    editing 'Almagest'--- i guess. 0
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    notes 1
    jellyfish 2
    lingering 3
    flirting 4
    here and there 5
    candy 5
    stayin awake 2
    ( ) 1
    lagos 6
    Conflict of Gods 2
    a dream response 3
    time? 1
    thoughts 3
    sluggish 1
    silence is a sheild 4
    deciding to jump @ Davenport 3
    death is treasure 2
    pause 6
    homeless 2
    tossin and turnin 2
    father 2
    close to being further 2
    meeting you 2
    Revision 2
    Amiga 3
    Commitment and wishes 2
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