PERFECT TOGETHER

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    PERFECT TOGETHER
    PERFECT TOGETHER

    It’s like a Rainbow after the Rain..

    I’m like a Flower and you're the Bee…

    It’s like Creamer in a Coffee..

    Blended together and then it works perfectly!

    You and Me we’re just like these…

    With some Twists and Turns we might disagree

    Yet when we’re together…

    We create a Perfect Harmony.

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    TCpoeboy commented on PERFECT TOGETHER

    09-23-2009

    Wow! With some Twists and Turns we might disagree Yet when we’re together… We create a Perfect Harmony. So cool!
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    Qualin commented on PERFECT TOGETHER

    07-10-2009

    this one I like it has rythm..a beginning and a end I wish it were just a lil bit longer maybe you could work on this...other wise very good...Qualin
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    sorcererofmagic commented on PERFECT TOGETHER

    05-03-2009

    What a choice of words. Beautiful poetry. I'm glad you've had feelings like these.
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    lonewolf commented on PERFECT TOGETHER

    04-16-2009

    another well said poem
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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