Perhaps

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rough draft open for judging

Perhaps

the world is a disgusting place
with many bile intentions
so left is my prediction
your blinded foul state

new world order courted
more mortars imported
for more supported aborted
of the wealthy imported

blinded are we to foresee
the upper hand majestically
unfolded.
That has been spoon fed to thee
boastfully and then publicly reported.

naive am i to think
for everyone
united we stink
for we elected this bum

tattered and torn
maliciously born
I am the only one
with a verbally backbone.

I represent my family
he represents many scores
we are weakened tragically
to the wolves we are thrown

Standing, is no longer your right
demanding, grows no darkness
in midst of the light

Forsaken, to be consumed
too late to be continued
devastation, imp-lacing
multiple lacerations
through this world core.

Mind state forget it
Its real so dig it
To get it it where see fit it
so blow the lieutenant
rewarded with pennants

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am2anangel commented on Perhaps

03-03-2010

very well worded and thought provoking. well done.-tonya

knight4696 commented on Perhaps

11-14-2009

Perhaps you're correct!!! IMHB, This country is going to hell in a handbasket pretty damn quick. I myself did not vote for this sheep in wolves clothing, but my vote does not matter now. I fear it's too late and feel that as a society wehave lost so much in such a short period of time. such little things as; freedom, money, jobs and security. A great reflection of our present troubled state. God Bless the USA, we're gonna need it..... Ken

knight4696

11/14/2009

I meant IMHO

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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