Perpendicular Parallels

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Perpendicular Parallels

Pirouetting from a static crowd,

she came into my life and left me.

She left me in a daze of desire

and panic you could hear aloud,

as she led me to a crooked spire.

 

There, we cemented what we’d fought

and in a moment of weakness, or strength, I cried.

I cried out that it was unfair to be so irreplaceable,

and she, with the depth I’d always sought,

assured me everybody is erasable.

 

When I recall those moments, it hurts.

It hurts to laugh so hard at my willing.

That I ever believed gravity could grow

from such loose fibres and feelings reverts

I, she, all of you back to what we’d kill to know:

 

Whose is the face that you will see

when your eyelids kiss for the final time?

Who will you wait for when their time is near?

Only then can you know the identity

of the one you’ve truly loved every second of every year.

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MindNumbing commented on Perpendicular Parallels

01-27-2011

I think you've possibly penned my favorite line, of any poem, ever written. "Whose is the face that you will see when your eyelids kiss for the final time?" This really struck a chord, Arron. On MANY levels, and not just the typical "love chord", either. Thank you for this one.

wamomo commented on Perpendicular Parallels

01-17-2011

You must be a vampire...that's the only possible explanation for the unbelievable wisdom & depth packed into that young mind of yours...how old are you really??...c'mon...fess up...lol. Brilliant, as usual... :-)

Hampton commented on Perpendicular Parallels

12-31-2010

Beautifully done...................................................................Hampton

arronpalmer

01/04/2011

Thank you so much Hampton. And grats on the win btw.

Hampton

01/04/2011

And my thanks to you as well.

HarverTomsson commented on Perpendicular Parallels

12-31-2010

Oh, you wretched romantic you! I hope my daughter marries one of your clan. Harv

arronpalmer

01/04/2011

Haha, probably my favourite comment ever Harv! Thanks :)

ginga commented on Perpendicular Parallels

12-31-2010

Arron, The break-up always knocks us off our feet, wondering how the lover fooled us into thinking they were still in love. You have aptly described the heartbreak so succinctly causing the reader to feel deeply the subject's loss. ginga

arronpalmer

01/04/2011

Causing the reader to feel anything at all is poetry working. Thank you deeply for this great honour.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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