Personal Depression

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Personal Depression

What is wrong with my life tonight?
And no one says it'll be alright
So here I sit and wonder why
It'd even matter if I died

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princess0809 commented on Personal Depression

08-19-2009

that is a great poem, i personally think ot would matter if you died. even through your darkness days the sun will be shining meaning there is peace out there God can take all your pain just keep hanging in there.

Tempestlady commented on Personal Depression

08-09-2009

It will be all right as it can be. No one says because no one really knows but you! How long you feelings will live. Is solely up to the armor on your heart. Write on....

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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