petal ,thorn and glass

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    petal ,thorn and glass

     petal , thorn and glass sacred, they leave us bruised and alive . they leave us with a pain deep inside. that glass sacred scraps us raw and makes us bleed and one day all of them together help us make the bed that we lay in all alone. and sometimes we need help coming up from that tumbling , stumbling pain that love leaves us in.
       petal , it reaches down in that place that creates our ecstasy, and reaches to that wound that just wont heal that the glass created in our very soul. and petal it teaches all of us including me , that love is alive and that love can build a bridge between your heart and mine. and between the world again that petal can love find the other side and grow anything even thoughts we'll never know.
      glass can kill our salvation but never our devotion to the world and our soul. it leaves wounds that cant heal just like the petal in our lives. glass can bleed us dry and kill what we have inside. it can rip out everything we've tried to gain and replace with nothing but shame.

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    Dreamer123 commented on petal ,thorn and glass

    08-05-2009

    Very sad but yet very secret this is awesome well written great write this is beautiful god bless
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    1990lh commented on petal ,thorn and glass

    08-03-2009

    wow ver passionate fill poem poem i like it thought it was very powerful nice work
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    Smurf1 commented on petal ,thorn and glass

    07-18-2009

    That was fire, jenifer !!!! Tssss! (I have one for you!- Brave) Passionate brush strokes or red, with delightful waves of white, with gold, and blue, spiraling out of control into a submissive calm; similar to the colorful images of dancing in my mine, a slow dance a dance of love…. Heart, mind, body, and soul! I’m not only one with you I become you, as you are with me…. And life conceives us both like new worlds creating carnations’ beautiful and morning rose’s dripping dew surrounded by wild orchids. My beautiful wife holding my hand on the mountain top, over looking a rainbow sunset on a beautiful island oasis, within your deepest thoughts and my chest press tightly against your bosom’s, takes my breath away, leaving a sweet taste of perspiration on my lips. For you are my Earth, my Fire, my Air, and my Sun, like two lovers under the ski of Amune, you become my Egypt, and my Rah. I’ am lost in your love…. And I’m drifting threw currents of rushing rivers and waterfalls with you. I can’t seem to stop drowning in my own lust for you, I say to my self only a fool would want to be rescued from a death so merciful, the Lord count’s do it better himself …. Brave 1 09
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    daniel081180 commented on petal ,thorn and glass

    07-15-2009

    this is a poem that i had to read twice. it was really well witten and the message is of sadness yet at the same time hope. i love this. Excellent job. a perfect ten from me my dear.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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