PharO

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    PharO

    I
    Count
    Stones
    Bones
    And
    Tones
    To Be
    The Wind
    Alone now
    A Quiet space
    Reaching to find you
    Expansion of mind
    Reaching to find a kind of place
    where vision flows and color flies
    through too A candle light spiral as it floats on by in the sky
    Tonight in my dream I remember why I write into the Light
    A Pharaoh searches for his Queen
    Through time and space he comes again
    Sound of a Wind hears
    Expansion of Mind
    A Quiet space
    Pharaoh's Queen
    Time now
    To sea
    Hear
    As
    Here
    She
    Be
    Fair
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    to the Center ........... the other one

    Fair Count
    Stones Be
    She Bones
    And Here
    As Tones
    To Be, Hear.
    To Sea, The Wind.
    Alone now. Time now.
    Pharaoh's Queen. A quiet space.
    Reaching to find you. A quiet space.
    Expansion of mind. Expansion of Mind.
    Sound of the Wind hears, Reaching to find a kind of place
    where vision flows and color flies. Through time and space he comes again.
    A Pharaoh searches for his Queen, through too A candle light spiral as it floats on by in the sky.
    Tonight in my dream I remember why I write into the Light

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    WordSlinger commented on PharO

    05-23-2009

    This is amazing, total Talent, very very original, i know how Pharaoh searches, a very good write,:)

    abbadejuju commented on PharO

    05-21-2009

    YO THAT WAS AMAZING.I LOVED IT. IT LITERALLY DID SOMETHING TO MY BRAIN WHEN I READ. I DON'T KNOW WHAT BUT IT WAS A GOOD THING. A FAVORITE FOR SURE!

    IzzyGumbo

    05/28/2009

    Hugs you! How sweet and wonderful you are thank you! I enjoyed your writing very much also my friend and I'll be back to read you again. :)

    dahlusion commented on PharO

    05-21-2009

    A delightful prose poem with an interesting story, dream, illusory affect. You vision surely flows in this one.

    Sopradiction commented on PharO

    05-18-2009

    Very twizted maze-- i thought it was meditation at first--but i guess "dream" explains all the sudden misleading lines you wrote--very nice though

    IzzyGumbo

    05/28/2009

    yes, it's a strange one :) I was fiddling fibonacci style poetry and it just went hay.wire. ;) I enjoyed it. lol Thank you for reading Sopradiction

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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