Picnics in the moonlight..........

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    Picnics in the moonlight..........

    Picnics in the moonlight, 
    A romantic plain to see.
    Daffodils and cold champagne,
    With love to you, from me.

    A limousine awaits us,
    To take us very soon.
    So we can roar into the sky,
    In a big hot air-balloon.

    When all that is over,
    It is you who'll hold the key.
    For the next words I shall say to you, is-
    "Will you marry me?"

    This love I have within me,
    A love which makes me whole.
    A love I wish to share with you,
    You're my very heart and soul.

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    MindNumbing commented on Picnics in the moonlight..........

    09-30-2010

    Simply beautiful, bard... from the title to the very last line. Well done ~ 10 from me :)

    TheScarletbard

    09/30/2010

    thank you very much

    TheScarletbard commented on Picnics in the moonlight..........

    09-08-2010

    Thank you so much my friend...regards from the UK

    MootPoint commented on Picnics in the moonlight..........

    09-08-2010

    Thanks, A 10 from California. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.