pictures do say more

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pictures do say more

I flip through your pictures
they say more than a photo can say
from under the sheets of gothic metal
such endearing sweetness portrays
colors illuminating around your face
places more than a vintage presentation
an underlining of a passion conflicting
in a branded spiritual containment
I applaud your gifted poetic insights
as it heightens your readers to the debths
of a purity within your pastels and "vivid-ness"
can only say that a beautiful heart has kept
in a safe way tucked with ribbon bows of silk
heavily guarded by the thorns of a rose
how could one see what they spread in pictures
as others could see them as brave and bold





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poeticdimension commented on pictures do say more

03-01-2009

beautiful writing-great job

prophesy commented on pictures do say more

02-28-2009

nice write.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Hathor4Wine’s Poems (91)

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sudden shivers 0
use of words 0
per se 0
pioneer 0
the quest 0
wide awake 0
welcome to cheap dates 0
crawling for candy 1
all made up 0
necessary diversities 0
burial ground 1
I apologize 2
beyond this 1
my rhyme or reason 1
a replica 3
I stand beside 2
imperial revolution 1
what I do know is... 3
a split tongue 1
a slight of step 1
a once a year occasion 2
a death 1
that amazing light 2
the eye in question 1
my crowded wall 3
no facsimile 2
a vision 2
before I am consumed 2
Compunction 1
essential 1
gewgaw 0
to be a better vine 1
passed by 1
criminal 3
soul burn 5
Thrilled 2
eyes to see 1
poker night 2
a hidden silence 1
you unfinished 4
deep-diving 1
600 mile void 0
untitled love 1
said and done 1
is it warm enough? 1
a song bird fate 2
sad bird 1
and so 3
to my friend 1
untitled 1
Hello to Myself 1
in plain view 1
half note 2
your neighbor 1
to those who forget... 2
that day will come 3
all eyes on you 3
Bella Claire 0
a mirror's poor reflection 1
dirt 2
within reach for now 0
red dawn surfacing 1
how close... 1
pictures do say more 2
forget not 0
I've missed it 3
all is forgiveness 4
it bounced back 4
figure eights 2
My Dancing Queen 3
more to go on 3
off its axis 2
glazed 5
flip side 3
easy now... 3
untimely 3
ignorance 3
exposure 6
one more time 0
inside out 1
queen of denial 3
another 180 degrees 2
and we must 1
It's Always You Too 2
The Cult of "Education" 5
only to return 2
hollywood entrapment 6
not so unseen now 4
Look! No Guard Rails! 4
you just made my day 2
Plenty Of It 3