Pieces Of Diety

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    Pieces Of Diety
    Walking softly in this time & place
    Which seems to wipe the smile right from my face
    I have come to where I believe I understand
    That the perceptions I hold are fully at my command
    If I choose to be blue in the face of pain
    It is in this perception of hell I have chosen to remain
    I now see that the memories of my personal past
    Can no longer conform to the molds from which they were cast
    Each time I relive them & allow "ME" to feel
    I create them a reality and make them more real
    But if I embrace them & the lessons they've taught
    If not by their emotions am I now caught
    I will grow, enlighten & transform
    I will move well beyond the accepted norm
    And I will evolve into who I am destined to be
    A man, an individual; a part of Diety.
    END
    by Justin Eaglefeather

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    dancinghawk commented on Pieces Of Diety

    09-25-2009

    i luv this piece ... clarity on how we carry our stories, create our stories ... beautifully said ... i have one proofreading suggestion ... which i almost never make, but it's an easy fix ... unless it was intentional, which i don't get from the sense of the poem ... "deity" instead of "diety" ... thx for your words and your beautiful heart!
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    stellar commented on Pieces Of Diety

    09-25-2009

    love this...i sense that u are a nonconformist as so am i...this poem gives me the strength to face my true destiny with courage..thanks
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    MsVee commented on Pieces Of Diety

    09-05-2009

    It really moved me to remember what made me blue and how I got over it, and what I learned from it, I appreciate what you wrote here!!!
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    blindmaster commented on Pieces Of Diety

    08-08-2009

    That is a interesting concept! We all are creations from the creator a part of diety! Very well put
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    lightcourier commented on Pieces Of Diety

    07-06-2009

    "Choosing to be blue in the face of pain" Like that stoic line, echos of epictetus. Nice work1 Thanks!
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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