pieces of light

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pieces of light

pieces of light
pierce into my darkness
shattering upon impact
scattering and refracting
across an abyssic landscape
highlights of prismic colors
rain down like an exploding rainbow
and fizzle into nothing
in a garish display of dominance
the darkness consumes and devours
the fragments as they fall
until no more remain
the darkness settles back in

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amerstat commented on pieces of light

04-12-2010

this brings me to so many places ive been in my life where nothing can help me (the light) then, the help breaks in and does its work and leaves...taking me right back to where i was in the first place. i just love it!!

Dano

04/12/2010

thanks amy

Madelynn commented on pieces of light

04-09-2010

Reading this feels like I just dropped a hit of.....uh..I mean, a baseball! LOL!-WOW, thank God you sent that friend request-lookie what miss molly's been missin'! I don't think it is humanly possible to paint more vivid colors through words, then YOU just have! This 'lightshow' was magnifico!!-no I am not bi-lingual, but after reading this mind melter, I think I just started mysteriously using an extra 20% of my brain!!-LOL!!(thanks, maybe now I'll be able to figure out how to eat with those crazy chop-stick thingies finally!! lol)~You are a mind-altering genius, and you give the gifts of the unknown through your mastery! guess what new friend??-Yeppers, you ARE brilliant!!-Promise to keep on shinin', and I promise to keep on readin'!-10, but of course.-Maddi

Dano

04/10/2010

thanks again... for reading and for your overly kind words

BringMeBullets commented on pieces of light

04-08-2010

Beautiful! Your writes allow my imagination to prance in my mind like a doe in a meadow. I will begin to start watching your page closely for more writes... I enjoy your work thoroughly. Thank you for sharing! Wonderful! A ten from me.

Dano

04/09/2010

thanks for reading

TheDreamWalker commented on pieces of light

04-07-2010

simply amazing and wonderful truly a great write as usual dano you have out done yourself once againd! =) thank you for sharing with us

Dano

04/09/2010

thank you for reading mel

Tempy commented on pieces of light

04-06-2010

pieces of light pierce into my darkness shattering upon impact scattering and refracting across an abyssic landscape i really enjoyed these lines, overall great write

Dano

04/07/2010

thanks tempy

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Dano’s Poems (150)

Title Comments
Title Comments
from an angels view 19
searching the darkness 10
a letter from santa 14
thanksgiving (acrostic) 12
the depth of... 11
ive wished 7
absentee 12
this is... 13
a journey into the dark 7
the cold of november 14
your voice 12
the yin to the yang 14
twisted 9
autumn 14
i think it happened again 11
luna~tic 19
the darkness 13
a blinding eclipse 16
the universe... 18
the wind of sorrow 14
my sorrow weeps 16
where but the dark... 12
immortal kiss 47
in a darkened room 17
our mother 7
within these flames 12
nocturnal (acrostic) classic rock 7
behind wrought iron bars 25
what i write (part 2) 8
today 17
the world in grey 6
the reality of... 5
in the shadow of a mountain 6
nothing will ever be the same 10
of cemetary dreams (and nightmare scapes) 12
next to a bed... 18
but... 15
at a funeral 12
seventeen (acrostic) 11
the fortunate one(s) 7
what did i do... 24
ashes to dust 45
dancing in the moonlight 14
disempowering the pain 14
the butterfly 10
what i write 14
sorry (i killed the after glow) 11
the humidity rises (an erotic tale) 9
pieces of light 8
the sad pumpkin &... 9
my face 12
for a long time... 14
(an explination of) distractions 6
tell me... 6
the charelston cookie tin 9
silent self destruction 8
exposed 13
the means of the day (a true valentines poem) 2
a poem about nothing... 8
blood bleeds black 7
dissecting myself 3
i will be just fine 3
the stacking of bricks 3
the complexities of depression... 4
spirits & ghosts 3
**random chaos** 2
bloodlust 3
...somethings missing... 2
15 years... 3
beauty sleeps entombed (parts 1 & 2) 3
**untitled** 2
the overstuffed closet 3
the candy dish 2
anxiety speaks 2
**untitled** 2
myself and the light 6
the fog 2
fire and tears 3
cerebral meltdown 3
sometimes i wish... 1
drawing strength from a starr... 2
disappointmen
t...
1
**untitled** 1
the flower garden 3
nature... 1
reaching out 2
the dark and the light... 1
the insistent demon 2
sorry... 3
forgive me lover... (parts 1 & 2) 2
im so sorry... 3
**no title... just random thoughts** 1
to eternity... 2
winter wind whips... 1
tired 2
lucid dream 1
the rains came... 2
the mourning light 1
another jagged pill 1
i just cant... 1
entitlement?!
?!?
1
entitlement!!
!!
1
burning within 4
inside of me 1
projected pain 1
the night... the dakness & the truth? 1
panic 2
the mourning fog 1
when the fires burn 1
through the night 1
shadow casts 0
a mournful rain 1
i cant protect me 2
my comfort place 0
an echo shifts 1
the monster 2
welcome to my life 0
the past is alive... 1
... 1
standing on the edge 2
my smile... 1
anxiety 2
my reality 0
another view... 0
untitled... 0
jagged pill 2
in the dark 1
what to do 1
how can i... 1
life... 3
a crust of pain 1
keeping me weak... 2
my dark world 3
another night of wondering 2
in the attic 4
i hold most dear 2
the me inside of me 2
another day 1
dreamed in a dream 2
a year in the life (dealing with death) 1
i look... 1
where my secrets are kept 1
a mouthful of words 2
i will not fear (when my eyes are blind) 2
i am aware (i'm already dead) 7
standing in the silence of my own shadow... 3
a blinding dark 1
growing pain 3
the longest of nights 5
... 7