PIECES

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  • Lost Love

    PIECES

     

    A last cry for you tears my heart into

    Pieces

    All this time I thought our love was real.

    You took the love I gave you, and turned it into hate.

    How could you be so very cruel, and treat me this way?

    Now all I had, has crumbled into

    Pieces

    How could I think there was something there for us?

    You always knew just how to hurt me. 

    All the things you said to me I always believed.

    It’s over and now I shall collect all the

    Pieces

    A final tear escapes my eyes. I now turn to find a real love.

    I only regret it will be someone new.

    Maybe they’ll love me in a way I can love them back.

    I thought you loved me,

    but those were only,

                                         Pieces...
                                         
                                        of a lie.
                                       

     

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    mamasan commented on PIECES

    11-01-2009

    No matter, and don't grow static and bitter. Rather, use this bad experience to teach you how to turn it in to something good. You will be ready when your true love finds you; so keep your eyes and senses alert and don't dwell on that negative time. Pick up the pieces and light a match and send them in to oblivion.

    EvilTwin commented on PIECES

    10-02-2009

    That was really good. It seems so many women go through this battle with men. And a lot of times, she naver forgets that person. Keep writing.

    MrGee commented on PIECES

    08-27-2009

    EXCELLENT! good rhymn and rhythmn and I especially like the A final tear escapes my eyes. And the ending line is top shelf. The picture the poem places in the mind of the reader cud not be better and filled with emotion. a definite 10

    NoLeafOfClover commented on PIECES

    07-13-2009

    I feel sad to read that love does die, but departing as once friends not foe. And to feel this way, broken and beat down by hurtful words, people will never know. We dont realize how much we hurt others, because we insecure and foolish, and that leads to a sad poem.

    Artist commented on PIECES

    05-24-2009

    I hope you found the love. The use of the word Pieces in this poem is great - I like the way you've made it central to the poem. It's sad when we think we're giving love when really the other person is twisting it into hate and cruelty.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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