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me and the easter bunny
hanging out and breaking laws
with honest thieves and santa claus
           he had time between toys
the tooth fairy owes me money
because the only thing under my pillow
           are dreams
bloody mary and the bogey-man
are smoking crack in my bedroom
they lie and say, "no, we're not !"
but i can feel the ghosts and smell the fumes
now here comes candy-man
and he is primed to play candy land
as a banshee screams in the distance

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EyesOfRain commented on pills

08-26-2012

Very cool! I love the imagery and grand vague adventures.

Kingwebstar commented on pills

06-06-2012

Great poem I bet you could rap too .lol excellent it is so different in a good way I enjoyed reading it. Love DA KING

Crush

08/27/2012

i cannot rap but i think i've written it. i cannot rap due to a speech impediment.

cheronld commented on pills

04-08-2012

Its funny....but after rereading this I have gained a new perspective....somewhat anyway....Things are honestly and rarely ever what they seem....hmmm....but its still a great piece that I enjoyed from you....as always....Cher

Crush

04/08/2012

exactly...haha. thanks for reading me.

purdylox commented on pills

11-10-2010

I love this poem, it flows so well, great write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Crush

11/10/2010

''pills'', was written at a bad time as i watched some friends go through some things. thank you.

SerenityWintirs commented on pills

09-20-2010

Wow! This is so astounding. It actually gave me chills. My favorite line is "...the tooth fairy owes me money because the only thing under my pillow are dreams..." Definately a 10!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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the other 1
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the ride 1
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waiting 3
welcome 5
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perfect 6
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touch ( aka, am i made of summer ) 8
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3
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cancer 8
skyline 5
st. saviour 2
satellites 4
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snapshot 5
fists 12
lauren 17
insomnia 18
ceremony 12
mother 14
ash 27
the june bug 15
low 19
thorns 10
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mr. sparkle 15
dresses 15
glass 13
cemetaries 18
throe 18
if i fell in love 27
pills 22
off black 20
mannequin 22
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unfairly fairy 26