Pinocchio of society

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    Pinocchio of society

    I am the Pinocchio of society,
    A slave of humanity, puppet to vanity,
    I move and dance to the beat of insanity,
    Controlled and oppressed is what’s the reality,
    I’m not pulling the strings and that’s the real tragedy,

    I am the Pinocchio of society,
    But isn’t it funny, how I live in the dark yet think it’s still sunny,
    How I reject reason yet embrace formality,
    To believe in divinity with no basis in reality,
    When all it creates is bitterness and anxiety,

    I am the Pinocchio of society,
    But aren’t we all, struggling to be real but beset with flaws,
    Hoping that one day the strings will all fall,
    I dare not say it my nose may grow tall,
    That we could be more than we ever may know,
    When this old block of wood discovers its soul,
    Pinocchio will not be a puppet no more…..

    Edwin Nderu Kamau

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    HiddenAngel commented on Pinocchio of society

    12-29-2009

    wow i really like this poem ...i totally got into like great job man..

    DeepEclipse commented on Pinocchio of society

    08-12-2009

    That was a gorgeously crafted piece of poetry right there. It is like we're the entertainment as reality watches us on television. Flipped all kinds of upside down and backwards. Pulled and dancing to the will of the puppetmaster. Thoroughly enjoyed the read.

    MizBlaze commented on Pinocchio of society

    07-26-2009

    DAMN brotha you kept it REAL. Thats the type of spit I like to see..stands for real change! Eventually...hey you should peep this website. www.prisonplanet.com... and also youtube this video "Terrorstorm". It really opens one's eyes and judging from this poem you like to stay up on things around you and take a realistic approach with your views...Stay up...power to the people!

    Dreamer123 commented on Pinocchio of society

    07-21-2009

    this is really good i like it when you ryme its awesome. great write i like the way you put yourself as a pinocchio. thats fantastic. great. love it keep up the great work alright.

    SuSpence commented on Pinocchio of society

    07-13-2009

    There are many things which could be said of this poem to describe its greatness. The structure, the flow of the words, the rhyme scheme to name a few. And it would all be true. But what glares off the page is the truth and meaning of your words. This poem speaks to me in waves! And still despite the serious tone of the poem you describe your view throughout all you have seen as seeing the sun despite living in the dark...I begin hearing Bob Marley's 'Three little Birds' in my head when reading this. 'Don't worry.....about a think......'cause every little thing, is gonna be alright'. Despite everything you keep a positive attitude. Great write.

    daydreamer23

    07/14/2009

    much appreciated my friend i love bob marley too :) glad you enjoyed it

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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