pirate

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    pirate

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    you invade my privacy
    enter my dreams
    and break my heart each night
    what is with this piracy
    where you steal off and steer clear of the light
    devil or angel, who fails at flight

    i am helpless and vulnerable asleep
    tis why i pray my soul to keep

    tease me with your pulchritude
    unequal in depth or attitude
    and no one can walk with you here

    you kiss me so deeply in dreams
    that i fear the gods may cry envy
    i tear at my seams
    now i fall without any










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    EyesOfRain commented on pirate

    08-21-2012

    If I wasn't forced to type 50 characters I would write only one word. Beautiful. Just Beautiful.
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    Crush

    02/27/2013

    thank you so much. ( belated )

    lisaner commented on pirate

    07-24-2012

    Well written- the reader shares delightful dream and then the low of waking up.
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    Crush

    07/24/2012

    thank you so much. the "low" of waking up. i like that !

    cheronld commented on pirate

    06-27-2012

    Not ashamed to say I had to look up the word... pulchritude...lol....anyway...I can't help but envy your dreams and/or your role in it.....this could almost be to some a nightmare as the pleasure is but out of your grasp....the teasing tone of this had a foreplay kind of vibe that was quite nice....enjoyable read my friend as always....nicely done....Cher
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    Crush

    07/21/2012

    i just saw this comment. thank you for expressing your always insightful and beautiful ways.

    BreeLove commented on pirate

    06-26-2012

    ONCE AGAIN YOU AMAZE ME! Why is it I envy this person so... the one you dream of who is trying to steal ur soul, taking what is not hers, though it seems for her own devlish pleasures , but i promise she wants to stay , if only you would let her.
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    Crush

    06/27/2012

    all i ever wanted to hear about JUST ONE of my poems is someone say...."that is amazing" or "you amaze me ." you have said both of theses things to me and YOU, Bree, amaze me. love you.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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