Pity 's joy

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    SEE LISTEN HEAR WHEN I WRITE POETRY I USUALLY BE THINKING OF A CERTAIN LYRIC OF A SONG THAT GETS STUCK IN MY HEAD AND BAM BECAUSE OF THAT ONE LYRIC I GOT A POEM SAME THING HAPPENS WHEN I READ BOOK I DON'T HAVE TO FINISHED IT IT ALSO COULD BE A SENTENCE A WORD OR EVEN JUST A ACTION AND WHAM BAM I GOT A POEM.

    Pity 's joy

     I am breathing I am alive
    So why is there pity in your eyes
    Hated despite all of you
    You only know half the truth
    Ears mute Eyes blind
    As you try to grasp little of time
    Don't climb the ladder of despair
    Never thrown your arms out in the air
    Cause when you think life is unfair
    It will bare sweet fruit & make you forget about your foul mood
    So don't secluded yourself in darkness
    Warm your heart open your eyes
    And wash off what you deny the most
    Don't stand there like a ghost
    Move Be motivated
    And watch your pain be elevated to unbearable joy
    Don't listen to what others say they are just a decoy
    So enjoy laugh as if everything in the past
    Cause life is a blast

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    sevyn7 commented on Pity 's joy

    02-06-2012

    great write, your poem has a wonderful message, things do get better.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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