Platonic

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    Platonic
    You host my thoughts
    As the summer breeze caresses my skin
    Gently pushing me in your direction
    Though, you are not here
    We have achieved a love, platonic love...
    Meaning I'll never experience your close embrace
    But, I love you
    And your smile is my smile
    You are far from my arms to secure
    But you are free to soar
    Which lifts my spirits
    Because I feel real love

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    jpmaster13 commented on Platonic

    05-02-2010

    kinda the sad love that is truer then the love that is just lust. I don't like the line "As the summer breeze caresses my skin" just seems like it messes with the mood of it a bit for me.
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    Plot121 commented on Platonic

    11-21-2008

    This was good. I thought the way you conveyed the message was well done and it wasn't done in a sappy way good work Plot121
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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