PLAY WITH ME

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    PLAY WITH ME
    I play to win
    I play to show...
    Fighting against time.
    revives my world,
    all covered
    with magic love.
    his docile face
    knotted to the past
    do not fall in love that fast.
    God says... they already smile,
    the pain s gone,
    it won't come no more....
    Dawn keeps this light on,
    unforgetable moments
    are strong like stones.
    Open your magic window,
    give him light,
    give him heat,
    give him the trust
    cover with death and dust.

    AIXA

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    laydbak1 commented on PLAY WITH ME

    08-11-2009

    I enjoyed the see-saw displacement of emotions and passions between the car and the woman... An very interesting and creative piece, and you made it work... I didn't like the alt-possibility of a violent ending you dropped there at the end, but that's a reality too... Well done....
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    AIXA

    08/12/2009

    Sometimes mistery of happy and sad endings is fun.

    HarverTomsson commented on PLAY WITH ME

    08-07-2009

    Oh, the confusion between car lust and lady lust. I'm trying to remember what my Dad warned me about, was it hot cars and fast women, or fast cars and hot women? Steamy. steamy, and just a bit threatening at the end. Just so much better to get adrenaline pumping. You know guys well, don't you?
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    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    I have that white Shelby GT and is fast and hot, so do I.

    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    Also I know men likes cars and woman together, got it?

    HarverTomsson

    08/09/2009

    Ingrid, Ingrid, my Yamaha FJR1300 may or may not beat your GT on the top end. But I dare say the ride at 140 mph is waaaay more memorable. But I do luv that White GT. I'll be checking for it at the stoplights on the strip Saturday night.

    Grito commented on PLAY WITH ME

    08-07-2009

    Wuaaaaoooouuu! Late, late, late la sangre en mi corazon,
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    Grito

    08/21/2009

    Son las ruedas, mi flor querida, que nos guian en el aladar a nuestras esquinas de piel y dulzura.

    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    You made my heart beat fast too.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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