Please let me be free

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  • Anger
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  • Letting Go

    Please let me be free

     I can't take it no more
    I want to run away
    And be free
    I'm stuck here in chains

    Wheres the key?
    Please, I just want to be free
    He won't let me be
    Why can't he just see?

    I'm here against my will
    I try so hard
    This wasn't part of the deal
    Please let me be free

    If you love me you'll let me go
    The look in your eyes
    Tells me you hate me
    Please let me be free

    I'm your daughter
    And I can't take it no more
    Your smothering me
    I just ever so bad need to be set free


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    Tempestlady commented on Please let me be free

    09-27-2009

    Go to a college and apply, talk to a recruiter - your for sure get by. Air Force was good to me, there is a whole world out there you'll see. Look to the future, forget about the past. the world is your oyster, just ask. Very real pain here, but nice form and symmetry. Good use of expressive words. Would like more touch, smell, color, adjectives, but good, really good.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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