Please, Quit Putting Me Down


Please, Quit Putting Me Down

Please, quit putting me down?
Quit thinking that you're clown.
You put tears in my eyes,
And made me cry.
I'm sorry that I'm not as smart as you.
You don't know what you put me through.
I'm trying with all my strength.
I have such little length.
To get from here to there.
But, I don't think you care.
I'm trying very hard to pass.
And I'm truly getting to class.
I don't know why I have such a low grade.
I wish I had someway to trade.
I'll try with all my power.
I'll continue to try every hour.
You're not a clown.
Please, quit putting me down.

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hotrod2072 commented on Please, Quit Putting Me Down


Sad, but good. Sorry, if its from personal experience.



thanks, its just that approx. 10 yrs ago i was in a car accident so i have short term memory loss, so i cant remember everything and my mom/brad just kept putting me down about it but didnt even notice.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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