poem 65

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    poem 65

    there is deep
    sdness in your eyes
    for i have made
    a thousand lies;
    come baby let
    me hold you tight
    and lock you
    in my arms all night!

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    ansari commented on poem 65

    06-12-2010

    so much said , in so few words. understanding, love, caring for another ......... its laconic, I love it. a 10 from me.

    camins4955

    06/12/2010

    thanks a lot!

    Artie commented on poem 65

    10-18-2009

    Hmmm - this is so short, it's difficult to figure out where it's coming from.It feels like an apology to me, or the attempt to lie to get what is wanted.

    camins4955

    10/26/2009

    something like missing somebody and longing for care.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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