Poem For A Red Rose

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    "secretkiss" commented on Poem For A Red Rose —"sensuality has nothing on you, man. wow. you write like a man in love. she must be quite a rose. tell you what new friend, if you ever get tired of playing in her garden, you can water mine. whew, to hot". SK

    Poem For A Red Rose

    ©dah

    ©dahlusion

    This erotic poem is from my forth-coming third book due in Autumn 2011
    from Stillpoint Press, Spokane, Washington.

    contact: www.mystillpoint.net

    Thank you,
    dah

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    GUSTY commented on Poem For A Red Rose

    08-15-2010

    WAOOH!!! I CAN'T REALLY EXPLAIN WHY A 'WORLD' BECOMES 'AIR-TIGHT' ANYTIME IT GOES EXTREMELY ROMANTIC AND S-E-X-Y !!!! A WORK FULL OR BEAUTY!!!! BRAVO, DAH!!!

    dahlusion

    08/17/2010

    thank you...

    carynontherhine commented on Poem For A Red Rose

    08-02-2010

    You have a way with your descriptiveness that brings the reader into the poem. I felt like I was the rose. Ha! Great write Dah!!!!!!!!!!

    dahlusion

    08/04/2010

    thank you...

    DrewMcNee commented on Poem For A Red Rose

    07-29-2010

    I've always said that botany is a good subject for poetry. And you are obviously more than a weekend gardener. Drew.

    dahlusion

    07/29/2010

    You may have spelled it wrong: I am a "weakened" gardener [smiles], weakened by the scent of a wet, red rose...thank you...

    angel33614 commented on Poem For A Red Rose

    07-20-2010

    You truely have a way with the written word that is compared to very few, masterful write with such vivbrant and colorful images!!! I dare to say this poem is not a literal translation about a rose but my mom says i am not old enough to guess what, lol! I also didn't seen the adult only rating tagged to the poem, lol. On a more serious note this poem is pure genius! The arrangement of words and the style is just perfect to create such a beautiful and lusty image! I am not sure my comment can top SK but I am a guy and not that kindof guy, lol. So I will only say this poem is hot enough for me to get out of the kitchen! lol. I am working late into the witching hour and was falling fast asleep but I too am wake now, wide awake!!! lol Truely a beautiful poem in more ways than one! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! your friend Angel aka The poem buster

    dahlusion

    07/20/2010

    oh my, actually this is a "literal translation' about a rose in my garden that gets my sexual vigor heated and steamy. thank you...

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Poem For A Red Rose

    07-17-2010

    Ok, that did, you are determined for me to have that cold shower this morning....hehe.lol....excellent write my friend. love told so well, you words flow so smoothing off the tongue from beginning to end. thanks for this great write. love asha

    dahlusion

    07/17/2010

    oh, my...thank you, and always keep the shower hot...yum...

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