irielove’s Profile
please comment on my poems, i really do enjoy the feedback!!!
- Age: 40
- Location: Omaha, Ne
- Gender: Female
- Country: US
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Biography
I've been writing poetry and shot stories since I learned to write. Its a passion as it is for most. I have inspired and been inspired by many. My children have been the majority of my insperations thus far!!!
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Recent Poems
- In or Out
- Tags: PoemBuilder, Hope, Truth
- someone let me out of this boxin it i have seen nothingi have leaned nothingenclosed in a space completly and utterly strange to menot sure how to make it workin a ...
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- Fear Chasing
- Tags: Emotional, Life, Confusion, Loss
- I ranI ran fastI ran smartDown StreetsOver hillsI jumped fencesand brick wallsMy love could not catch meMy friend could not catch meMy brother kept paceYet still ...
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- Question
- Tags: Emotional, Sadness, Confusion
- CuriosityInflection of painA helpful hand turned evilA man younger than meHurt by the being that made himStronger than him, older and more powerfulTears become ...
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- His Advantage
- Tags: Sadness, Life, Memories
- IsolatedCan't moveArms heldo down.Legs not strong enough to kick awayIn my head I yell and screamNo one can hear meMy voice is weak.He knows what he's doingHe knows ...
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Papa profile comment
01-18-2011
- Watch the movie Monsters Inc. It will cure your fears.
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01/18/2011