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please comment on my poem "addiction"

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  • Age: 28
  • Location: private
  • Gender: Female
  • Country: US
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hey my name is Katie i was born in Georgia and have moved a lot 24 times to be exact. i write to release stress and to somehow understand my feelings. Ive been through a lot in my life and you can see that through my writing.
i hope you can some how understand and grasp what has, is, and will go on in my life through my writing.

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Dano profile comment

04-21-2010

thank you for sharing your words... i will be back to read more of your work

trainpain profile comment

03-17-2010

thanks for the advice!

Papa profile comment

03-17-2010

Hey. IT gets better. I promise it does. Just don't read too many sad poems.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

trainpain’s Poems (23)

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Title Comments
My Shining Rock 2
Im sorry (revised) 0
Im sorry 2
i dont care any more 1
addiction 2
you will conquere in times of trouble 0
everything works together 1
the unwanted birthday 3
temptations 6
Target 3
feelings lost in translation 1
bitter sweet harmony 2
change 1
I will stand firm 0
out of focuse 2
why i play sports 1
Battle 0
wake me 0
Twisted World 0
Mother 0
The Battle Field 0
cant you see? 2
The Helpfull Death 2