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please comment on my poem "addiction"

  • Age: 28
  • Location: private
  • Gender: Female
  • Country: US
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hey my name is Katie i was born in Georgia and have moved a lot 24 times to be exact. i write to release stress and to somehow understand my feelings. Ive been through a lot in my life and you can see that through my writing.
i hope you can some how understand and grasp what has, is, and will go on in my life through my writing.


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Dano profile comment


thank you for sharing your words... i will be back to read more of your work

trainpain profile comment


thanks for the advice!

Papa profile comment


Hey. IT gets better. I promise it does. Just don't read too many sad poems.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

trainpain’s Poems (23)

Title Comments
Title Comments
My Shining Rock 2
Im sorry (revised) 0
Im sorry 2
i dont care any more 1
addiction 2
you will conquere in times of trouble 0
everything works together 1
the unwanted birthday 3
temptations 6
Target 3
feelings lost in translation 1
bitter sweet harmony 2
change 1
I will stand firm 0
out of focuse 2
why i play sports 1
Battle 0
wake me 0
Twisted World 0
Mother 0
The Battle Field 0
cant you see? 2
The Helpfull Death 2