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    i love this woman....point blank. actually, she is the star behind most of the poems expressed here.

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    she is mighty
    when she stands before i actually shudder at her beauty
    as if it were her duty
    to be this knockout
    she is tall
    she is annie
    it seems she was made for me
    and i wish you all could see her
    and i wish you all could talk to her

    i don't fall in love easily
    but this time seems to be
    from which i cannot run and hide
    for my emotions, they coincide
    with the rest of me

    she is my point blank love
    no doubts in my heart
    and i have never seen truer or bluer eyes
    she is mighty

    she is my point blank love
    and i am glad i was alive to behold her
    imagine if i had missed out on this angel

    when she leaves, she takes so much of me
    but what she leaves behind
    is a gold mine 

    and annie
    i could spend hours stroking you hair
    or staring at the stars that you put out there
    in my night sky


    i love you.










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    EyesOfRain commented on point blank

    08-26-2012

    Wonderful, point blank! I love how frank and honest you are here. Open admiration for your woman. Very refreshing. An enjoyable read.

    Phission

    09/25/2012

    thank you so much, eyesO :)

    Tempestlady commented on point blank

    12-02-2011

    A very nice ode to annie and to love. You do have a knack for the love poetry thing so it seems......it makes for such a wonderful read....write on Tlady.....

    Phission

    12/13/2011

    thank you so much.

    innerbeauty30 commented on point blank

    10-16-2011

    wow that was beautiful I loved it so much what wonderful expression. very talented my friend.

    Phission

    10/18/2011

    oh thank you so much !

    Logik commented on point blank

    09-28-2011

    straight up dope........beautiful poetry very beautiful writing

    Phission

    09/28/2011

    oh thank you so much for your time and kind words. it is most appreciated.

    LeslieMay commented on point blank

    09-27-2011

    This is beautiful. Annie is a lucky woman indeed!

    Phission

    09/28/2011

    lol...i am the lucky one that i have gotten the chance to feel this kind of love. thank you so much for reading me.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Phission’s Poems (24)

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    freight rain 2
    goodbye 8
    sensual central 1
    goodnight, summer night 3
    the robin 2
    gun 4
    top of the sky 2
    eulogy 2
    do you love me 3
    i lost her 4
    home 2
    observations in random rows 3
    these days 1
    music and dreams 3
    point blank 5
    the gift 2
    breathing love 6
    position 8
    name 5
    one 3
    companion 2
    beware 4
    this ( for annie ) 3