Poof

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    Poof

    Many names he is known by but asshole is prominent

    His mind is a mischievous child begging to be scampish

    Curves of his grin match the vexatious dimples on his cheeks

    Pranksome thoughts are portrayed through his fingers and toes

    Almost devilish nature, malevolent tricks are carried out for love

    To be loved by him is to feel his insidious and trickish personality

    A greasy doorknob, plastic wrap on the commode, shaving cream in a comatose hand, warm water pooled under a limp finger are all a part of his frolicsome soul

    Asshole in the shape of a heart, he loves all and spares none.  Naughty by nature and malicious by demeanor.

    Sly is all he needs to carry out the day.  His shroud to his foxy ways.  Wicked little boy with a heart of gold.

    Ego of a king and stamina of a prince.  Knavish man but a strong lover.

    Naughty and tricky, full of quick witt.  Joker to the end and the heart of lion.

    For many names he is known by but asshole is prominent.  To me, however, he is my poof.  Unchanging and malefic.

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    PunkCutie commented on Poof

    06-10-2009

    i totally fell in love with this, its so deep, and i love your wording, "A greasy doorknob, plastic wrap on the commode, shaving cream in a comatose hand, warm water pooled under a limp finger are all a part of his frolicsome soul" i love it! the imagrey is so vivid and wonderful.it speaks out so well.fantastic job!
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    byjax commented on Poof

    06-08-2009

    Only someone who loved me very much could call me "malefic" and get away with it. And get away with it you did... If I were him I would think that if this is the absolute worse you think of me, I love you... you know me, and still I am your "poof". I hope he likes it. He should.
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    Chrisjan commented on Poof

    05-31-2009

    Your heart-felt description of this young man, is very vividly displayed in this well crafted poem. All guys are not like him. Thank you for sharing.
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    RavenBridge

    06/02/2009

    Thank you so much for you comments! This poem is actually about my fiance'! He wanted me to write a nasty poem about him and so I did and I didn't hold back either! Thanks again for the comments and keep in touch.

    kmooney commented on Poof

    05-30-2009

    Okay, I give up. Is this your ex? Your father?? Remind me not to piss you off. You really get down and dirty here Rave. Is this about scourned love? Or a violent, unfaithful relationship? Whatever it is, you certainly express your inner anger well. Or is it anger? In a way I could hear some remote feelings for this guy. Maybe you should move on. Hell I don't know. All I do know is that many guys can be real assholes. Especially to women who only want to be loved. Sounds like you de
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    RavenBridge

    05/30/2009

    This is actually about my fiance'. He wanted me to write a negative poem about him and so I did. But thanks for the feedback!

    jademelissa74 commented on Poof

    05-30-2009

    The imagery of this poem is quite deep and vivid. Pain seems to be involved with this piece. I liked the line "Asshole in the shape of a heart, he loves all and spares none" Good Job!
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    RavenBridge

    05/30/2009

    Thank you so much for your compliment. It's very much appreciated.:-)

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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