pook's lullaby

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    pook's lullaby

     somewhere?,careful placement within the evening
    quiet was my abduction.the doings of slumber.
    the last i recall?,giving a great big huge hug
    to the pillow for holding captive the
    beautiful fragrance your body is.sharing your absence.
    when i awoke,aware of the tears drowning out
    such sweet scent,i did witness the
    evaporation of my crying.a manifestation of
    an enthusiastic anticipation for your soon again presence.
    a bounty to the detainment of that aromatic youness.
    and the comforter looks to be challenge to the pillow
    for said such entrapment.it depends on the weather.

     tyke

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    knight4696 commented on pook's lullaby

    09-07-2009

    Hi Tyke - An emotional and sensous verse. maybe one of a New Love missed? Or possibly one of a lonely soul hoping and awaiting his lover's return, but denying the inevitable. I guess Im really not sure. I read it twice to try to detrmine which, but to no avail. Maybe, that;s what you intended? Anyway, the one thing I am sure of is that I gave it a 9 because I enjoyed it. :) Good Job! Oh by the way ... I posted a new one today also. "Under The Autmn Moon" Check it out - let me know what you think. Thanks, Ken
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