I met a fox the other day,
she lives so far away.
Perfect was her fur,
glowing in the moonlight,
she seemed to be sheer radience within the forest. 
I had to follow her scent,
this is where our dreams went. 
I knew this was ment to be,
this fox and me. 
I see her beauty,
she sees the fox in me. 
I bring her mice, 
I try to be nice,
not once but thrice.
As much is ment to be,
often she eludes me. 
I follow her scent,
my mission hellbent.
It sometimes causes me pain,
an energy drain,
emotional strain,
but follow her I cant refrain, 
I follow in the rain,
no ground I ever gain.
Always I follow,
always I'll remain. 
I love this fox,
she is the light that leads my way,
steals my heart every day,
never would I stray... <3

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knight4696 commented on Portent


Kage - This is a nice sentiment. A tribute to the one you love. The rhyming is this one seems a little forced at times - but, all in all - a good job.

racegirl6670 commented on Portent


OMG, are you really only 10?? I am so moved by your gift! I never would have guessed your age, such talent!!

DarkChi commented on Portent


cute. it's darling how you seen to love just being near her.

ravenrose commented on Portent


aww this is so cute. its very good. very good read

dumplin commented on Portent


Meant, not ment. Other than that, this is yet another fine piece of work for you. Thank you.



thank you, my english is not so good sometimes. i takes a long time to make my poems in english =)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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