Pot Cookies and Dayquil

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    Pot Cookies and Dayquil

    Once upon a time
    in a land of  bovine,
    There lived a fairy of the neatest kind.
    He lived in the cold and sometimes felt old,
    But she thought he was ill
    on pot cookies and dayquil

    Left in the snow, no where left to go
    What else could he do when he felt blue
    But to let nature's course do what it do.
    And tho she know he was only there for the thrill
    she'll still let him feed her pot cookie and dayquil

    So while she was choking and gasping for air
    she still let him hold her and pull on her hair
    And when Isheno longer feels her own will 
    She leaves him alone
    with pot cookies and dayquil

    then he'll be alone again to stare into the glass
    A frosted reminder of a remarkable past
    A place that he thinks about sometimes even still
    Especially when he's on pot cookies and dayquil.

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    SuSpence commented on Pot Cookies and Dayquil

    05-01-2010

    Ok nini, Shot in the freakin dark here, you wanna emarry me or what? LoL! I love this one on so many levels, I cannot even compute them all at this time. I will have to save this to favs, to ponder this piece often in the future. This is a 15 from me. -Spence

    Musicmynded1 commented on Pot Cookies and Dayquil

    04-30-2010

    cute.. real F@#kin cute... like it...................................;)

    LeslieMay commented on Pot Cookies and Dayquil

    11-18-2009

    Haha! Too cute. :) I imagine pot cookies are much like pot brownies. And add Dayquil on top of that? Whew! Talk about a stumbley day. :p

    Milkman commented on Pot Cookies and Dayquil

    11-03-2009

    cute, it really portrays the disjointed reality of a good pot cookie and daywuil high (or would that be a low), it doesnt matter I feel very mellow...LOL

    lonewolf commented on Pot Cookies and Dayquil

    10-31-2009

    cool little story. how did you come up with it? i wanna hear more!!

    nini2323

    10/31/2009

    lol a good friend was sick and we wrote each other poems lol

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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